Nouns

The Crayons writing group has been learning to use nouns in their writing. They learnt that a noun is a word to name a person, animal, place or thing. Naomi created a wordle to show the nouns she knew.

Skye's Story

Yeaterday Miss Bridgeland gave us the sentence starter Bang! the door flew open and... 
We then had to finish off the story. We had to use our imagination and also remember to use verbs in our writing.  


Audio recording >> Bang! the door flew open and than it broke...There standing in the door was ...the evil teddy nappers! Silently they crept in so they don't wake up the people. They sneak into Lucy room and opened her toy box lid gently, creek! Too loud but Lucy did not wake up, so they peered in. There were toys but only two teddy s. The teddy nappers were very miserable but they didn't give up. They were walking towards the door when fox turned around and saw Lucy was clutching a teddy. Fox tapped bears shoulder and pointed to it. They were silently happy and slipped out her teddy. "Yes" they whispered to each other. Next they sneaked into David's room and looked in his toy box. There were tons of teddy's in his toy box to the brim! So they took the whole toy chest. Now there job was done and it was nearly sunrise. So they took the teddy's to their ghostly  bat and spider filled shack. They opened the door. "AAAHHA!" they screamed. There were zombies everywhere! Sorry I didn't mention they just had a mum zombie, a dad zombie and a kid zombie. The zombies must have been pregnant. 




By Skye

Ada's Story

Yeaterday Miss Bridgeland gave us the sentence starter Bang! the door flew open and... 
We then had to finish off the story. We had to use our imagination and also remember to use verbs in our writing.  


Record audio or upload mp3 >> Bang! The door flew open and loads and loads and loads of kittens and cats flew out like a bunch of crazy cats. Captain  underpants heard it  with his super ears. He flew into action. "Holy underpants look at all those cats, " said captain Underpants. When he landed, he tried to use mind control to make them go back in but it was no use, they kept running out and having more babies. "I need back up", he thought. He used super voice to get the message to Super Diaper Baby and Super Diaper Dog. They heard the call and came to the rescue "What do you need". "I need you to help me put all these cats and kittens in that door before it seals it's self and leaves earth. With the help of the three heroes they put all the kittens and cats back into the door before it vanished.




By Ada

Corbin Acrostic poam

Chater box
On task
Responsible
Brave
Independent
Nice    

By Corbin
  

Naomi Description

My description

 My eyes  are brown  like a cranky bear my hair is browner than  a brown dog. My skin is darker then my dads skin. My favourite  thing is going  to the bumper boats.

By Naomi

Yesterday morning I went to the bakery around the corner from my house. I like it there because  at the bakery I got lollies.I think the bakery is really good.

By RILEY C.